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Dictator states:
The fascia was divided in cruciate from the rectus abdominis muscle split and the abdominal cavity entered.
Would this not sound better:
The fascia was divided in a cruciate fashion, the rectus abdominis muscle split, and the abdominal cavity entered.
or is it okay left as is?
Thanks in advance.