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Grammar review - me


Posted: Sep 03, 2013

Sometimes, we can get into bad habits, and I was wondering about your thoughts on the sentence below regarding comma usage (I tend to overuse commas)

"I advised a low-fat, low-cholesterol diet, and, for your information, your body mass index today is 40.2, which, by definition, places you into the obese range."

 

commas - mt

[ In Reply To ..]
My opinion - I think your sentence on the low-fet diet is correct, but in the sentence above, I would take out the comma following sometimes.

I think I might use too many commas, too, but I'm not sure.

commas - vn

[ In Reply To ..]
funny - I was thinking the same thing. The sentence does have a lot of commas, but I think they are all appropriate. The comma in the post after sometimes, however, needs to go.

Ty.. - sm

[ In Reply To ..]
Oops. Thank you both of you. I was so busy worrying about typing the sentence I wanted help with that I didn't pay enough attention to my own creation. :)

Commas - sm

[ In Reply To ..]
"I advised a low-fat, low-cholesterol diet, and, for your information, your body mass index today is 40.2, which, by definition, places you into the obese range."

I don't think you need a comma after "and."


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