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how would this sentence sound correctly? - dawn


Posted: Oct 13, 2009

Dr says:

 

He did have, while after a long day of hiking at Philmont, he had decided to stretch himself out and had jumped up and was holding a bar or treetrunk with his feet off the ground, he then developed lightheadedness and a loss of consiousness.

I am having brain block.. and nothing looks right.

After a long day of hiking at Philmont, he had decided to stretch himself out and had jumped up, and was holding a bar or tree trunk with this feet off the ground. He then developed lightheadedness and a loss of consiousness.

tia :)

 

I like your second interpretation, like this...sm - elaine

[ In Reply To ..]
After a long day of hiking at Philmont he had decided to stretch himself out, and had jumped up and was holding a bar or tree trunk with his feet off the ground. He then developed lightheadedness and a loss of consCiousness.

thanks! - dawn

[ In Reply To ..]
yes I like that better too. thanks :)


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